The table below compares data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

The table below compares data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
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The graph contrasts information for the world’s gigantic and compact ocean fishing fleets. From the statistics given on the chart, it can be easily observed that big
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employ fewer people than smaller vessels. Despite the smaller number of workers, the expenses and catches for large-scale boats are greater than those of small-scale boats.
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employees, small-scale fishing vessels offered 12,000,000 more employees, more than 24 times that of industrial
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.
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, small-scale vessels yield 5/6 of the daily net catch for food compared to large-scale
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, and large-scale
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collect a much bigger amount for industrial processing compared to the opposite type of vessel.
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, the investment spending per worker for industrial freighters is 120 times more than that for small-scale ferries.
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, the regular fuel oil depletion for bulk carriers weighing 14 to 19 million tonnes is approximately 10 times higher than the fuel oil consumption of corvettes.

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