It is more important for doctors to have good communication skills than to have deep knowledge in their discipline/field/specialization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days

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apply

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doctors

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have to learn outdoors their fields to understand well what exactly patients feel which means

doctors

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should learn skills

such

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good contact with patients

while

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doctors

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should not

careless

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their deep

knowlege

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knowledge

in their field, I agree that

doctors

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ought to be good

contant

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content

contact

with their patients. In

this

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essay, I will discuss both

poins

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points

point

of view. It is important to have communication skills especially

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doctors

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for doctors

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when they are facing people's issues that

leads

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complax

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complex

situations

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as if a patient is mad or he

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not know how to explain his issues

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task achievement

Expand on your points in more detail. Give specific examples to support your arguments.

coherence and cohesion

Work on your sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity.

task achievement

Good attempt at addressing both sides of the argument.

coherence and cohesion

Your introduction sets the stage for discussion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

100 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that people who immigrate to a new country should accept the new culture as their own rather than remain in separate minority groups and live in different lifestyles. Do you agree or disagree?

Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1. International travel is becoming cheaper than before, so more and more countries open their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Urban problems Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.