Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The idea of including
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in an individual's is considered wrong and unethical by many. There are a plethora of reasons for
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school of thought. The upcoming paragraphs will explicate those reasons
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my opinion in conclusion. Commencing with as to why eating
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as a food is not considered good. First and foremost, are the teachings of certain religions. To elaborate, there are religions on the globe
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whom every living organism has a right to live. There should not be any killing.
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, devotees of Jainism do not even wear any footwear as they believe it will cause harm to the micro-organisms that might be harmed.
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, the consumption of flesh is avoided.
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, meals with
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are associated with various health risks. If the flesh is not cooked at the proper temperature it could be a breading home to various disease-causing bacteria; one example of
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bacteria is salmonella.
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, it is inhumane to kill animals just for the food. There are other alternatives like mushrooms that could be opted by the people.
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, saving the ecosystem.
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meat
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provides a considerable amount of protein and macronutrients it comes with its own disadvantages. I believe that it completely depends on a person whether it is fit to consume
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or not.

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Task Achievement
Enhance your introduction by clearly stating your position on the issue.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use clearer topic sentences at the start of each paragraph to improve the flow of your ideas.
Task Achievement
Provide more relevant examples in your body paragraphs to support your points.
Task Achievement
Your essay addresses the task and presents some key arguments against eating meat.
Coherence and Cohesion
You have a clear structure with distinct paragraphs for different ideas.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • wrong
  • healthier
  • animals
  • conditions
  • killed
  • cruel
  • fair
  • diet
  • fruits
  • vegetables
  • better
  • longer
  • impact
  • production
  • land
  • water
  • energy
  • pollution
  • cultural
  • traditions
  • part
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