The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The given chart
illustrate
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the amount of how many tourists paid a visit to Caribbean
island
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over the period of 7 years starting from 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the aggregate arrivals to the
island
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experienced an upward trend.
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, more people stayed on the
island
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than on the cruise ships between 2010 and 2015 ,
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however
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visitors leaned toward the latter from 2016 to the end of the period. Looking at the graph in detail, one can see that the figure for visitors lodging on the
island
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stood at 0.7
million
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guests in the first year.After that, the number witnessed
significant
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a significant
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increase to 1.5
million
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despite a slight decrease of 0.25
million
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in 2016. In
term
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of the
statistic
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statistics
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for tourists accommodated on cruise ships, there was a mild fluctuation between 0.25 and 0.5
million
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in the proportion of cruise ship occupants, followed by a two-fold rise to 1
million
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in 2014. In the following three years,
this
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figures
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keeps growing to reach 1.5
million
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in 2017. The total of tourists
visited
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the Caribbean
island
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began at 1
million
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in 2010,
then
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this
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figure climbed rapidly to 3.5
million
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seven years later.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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