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The table and charts below give information about the total cost and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The table and charts below give information about the total cost and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
The table illustrates the total amount of money In
billion
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billions
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 of dollars the us spent on imported fish in 1988,1992and 2000,
while
Linking Words
 the pie chart illustrates the proportion of the imported fish to the us from
china
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China
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,Canada and other countries.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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