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some Correct your spelling
While
agrue
that preserving traditional Correct your spelling
argue
agree
skill
and Fix the agreement mistake
skills
ways
of Use synonyms
life
is pointless against Use synonyms
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technology
development, I believe that some traditional skills and Replace the word
technological
ways
of Use synonyms
life
cannot Use synonyms
be replace
with Change the verb form
be replaced
technology
, as Use synonyms
this
essay will demonstrate.
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FIrstly
, some traditional skill needs Correct your spelling
Firstly
human's
craftmanship, which cannot be Change noun form
human
replicate
by Wrong verb form
replicated
technology
or AI. Use synonyms
This
is because it requires Linking Words
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life-long
expertise and Correct your spelling
lifelong
personal
human touch. Correct article usage
a personal
For example
, the luxury brand Hermes, still Linking Words
produce
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produces
their
products by hand using Correct pronoun usage
its
the
traditional knowledge, the same way since Correct article usage
apply
their
brand Correct pronoun usage
its
established
in Add a missing verb
was established
1900s
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the 1900s
while
other luxury brands have turned to Linking Words
industrialize
. Replace the word
industrialisation
As a result
, Hermes is the only luxury brand that the sales continue to rise, Linking Words
while
others Linking Words
had
dropped.
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have
Secondly
, old Linking Words
ways
of Use synonyms
life
, in Use synonyms
other word
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another word
other words
is
culture. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Although
it is true that some traditions Linking Words
does
not function with the modern world, Change the verb form
do
but
not all Remove the conjunction
apply
needs
to be Change the verb form
need
extinguish
. It is more important in today's world to preserve culture because it is a unique proposition for a nation. Change the form of the verb
extinguished
For instance
, South Korea is now one of the leading Linking Words
country
in Change to a plural noun
countries
technology
, but they Use synonyms
also
use their traditional culture, Linking Words
sush
as food, and history to Correct your spelling
such
generates
worldwide awareness. These cultural Wrong verb form
generate
display
drive its tourism industry and bring tourists around the world to the country.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that old Change the determiner
displays
ways
of Use synonyms
life
or traditional skills should be protected and Use synonyms
preseve
, Correct your spelling
preserved
preserve
due to
cultural value and Linking Words
unpararel
craftmanship. It does not need to Correct your spelling
unparallel
be demolish
, it needs to Change the verb form
be demolished
be pass
on to the next generation.Change the verb form
be passed
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