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Most
people
know that climate change is happening gradually Use synonyms
due to
globalization. Some Linking Words
people
say that we should just accept whatever happens to us. Use synonyms
However
, since nature is unpredictable, we must prepare ourselves to live safely and in harmony. I will discuss and provide examples to support my argument that preventing is more important to avoid Linking Words
more
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apply
further
damage.
To overcome global warming, we must begin by looking at our environmental condition. During every rainy season in Jakarta, floods occur everywhere. Linking Words
This
happens because of poor drainage Linking Words
system
and water blockages caused by improper waste disposal. The impact from Fix the agreement mistake
systems
that is
massive, Linking Words
for instance
, the risk of diarrheal disease is rising. Many children and elderly Linking Words
people
who live in slum Use synonyms
area
are infected easily. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
As a result
, many patients come to the hospital more often to find the medicine.
Another problem Linking Words
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that happen
happen
from Change the verb form
happens
this
tragedy is business losses. Linking Words
For example
, the distribution of goods, medical supplies, and commodities is disrupted. Many shops close, and Linking Words
people
cannot travel Use synonyms
due to
flooding. Linking Words
This
cause has a lot of negative Linking Words
effect
not only in Change to a plural noun
effects
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the health
health care
sector but Correct your spelling
healthcare
also
in Linking Words
economic
, social, and Correct article usage
the economic
environment
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environmental
sector
. The first step to avoid Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
the
greater damage is to educate locals Correct article usage
apply
for
throwing garbage in Change preposition
about
a
proper place. Correct article usage
the
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
activity is very helpful Linking Words
to prevent
floods after rainstorms.
To summarize my opinion, to stop more Change preposition
in preventing
disadvantage
from climate disruption is our primary concern. As a mortal, we cannot negotiate with nature especially if problems occur Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
due to
human activity. In my view, the main responsibility for keeping our nature in balance lies with us.Linking Words
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