The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

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The bar chart illustrates the recorded number of seal,

whales

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whale

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and dolphin populations ,in Gormez

straits

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Straits

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, between 2006 and 2018.

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May 26, 2025

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Topic Vocabulary:

Bar chart
Recorded
Gormez Straits
Fluctuation
Seals
Whales
Dolphins
Height
Individuals
Steadily declined
Relatively stable
Lowest
Significant increase
Approximately
Slight recovery

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The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

Most countries spend lots of money on education as they start to recognise its importance. In your opinion which two following subjects are the most important for your people and which one is the least important?

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extend do you agree

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Some people think that researching the past is a waste of time and money. We should instead focus on the issues of today's world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?