The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart illustrates the recorded number of seal,

whales

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whale

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and dolphin populations ,in Gormez

straits

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Straits

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, between 2006 and 2018.

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May 26, 2025

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Topic Vocabulary:

Bar chart
Recorded
Gormez Straits
Fluctuation
Seals
Whales
Dolphins
Height
Individuals
Steadily declined
Relatively stable
Lowest
Significant increase
Approximately
Slight recovery

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The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

Some people say the fashion industry is bad for the environment, as it encourages consumers to buy new clothes all the time. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What are the main reasons of the sexual discrimination in the world? How we can overcome such a disaster?