The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The line graph below illustrates the difference in the cost of copper, nickel and zinc in 2014.
Overall
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, from the
graph
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graph,
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it could be seen that there
was
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were
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price
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fluctuations among the three metals with a significant
price
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change
of
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in
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Nickel, but a moderate
price
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change in both copper and zinc throughout the year.
Firstly
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, the
price
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of Nickel Peaked in January at 6% and gradually had a
fall
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in March at 1% where it maintained a constant
price
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till June with a
fall
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price
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at -3%, the
price
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had a constant rise from
july
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July
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to September, a lower
price
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fall
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was observed in October at -2% but the
price
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skyrocketed constantly up to 1% between November and December.
On the other hand
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, the
price
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of zinc rose from 1% to 3% in March which later steeped to its lowest in June and maintained a constant
price
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rise till September but steeped at a lower
price
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in October,
this
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price
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skyrocketed at 2% in December. Meanwhile, copper had the least amount of fluctuations among the other metals with its peak at 2% in January accompanied by a
price
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fall
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with a constant up and down
price
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til December where the
price
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was almost at 2%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, fall with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "skyrocketed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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