In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowiedge or experience.

In several nations, the
viewerships
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viewership
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of
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shows and the sales of
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novels are increasing. The rise of
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popularity could be
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attributed
to the fact that
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are well-crafted
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, which
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to
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with
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a curious
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nature seeking for thrill and
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hit.
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,
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stories
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the stories
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, plots and characters of these
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dramas and novels are interesting and often inspired by real-life incidents and filled with suspense and thrill. By watching and reading
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crime
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stories
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during their
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leisure
time, they are able to entertain their curiosity, which often feels rewarding as it
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the
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hormone, which provides instant gratification. The rewarding nature of instant gratification results in
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addiction amongst the
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and they are often drawn to
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stories
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to gain
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stimulation. In my opinion,
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crime
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genre not only
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as a great source of entertainment but
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promotes
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awareness
about crimes around the world.
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, I was unaware
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tourist trafficking, but when I watched the movie "Taken" I learned about local
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pretending to help
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tourists
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only to gather information about them and leverage it to kidnap
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tourists
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and
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them into prostitution. By watching
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movie I learn to be aware and cautious
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travelling abroad.
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,
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novels and shows can be educational and could promote awareness. In conclusion, the growing popularity of books and
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shows
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focusing on
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is
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their well-crafted
stories
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, enticing viewers and fostering
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curiosity
, which results in
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release. The desire for constant
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release is
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main reason why
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are
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towards
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crime
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the crime
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genre.

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