Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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start from you have done the thing, so let we don't do it for ceek our
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task achievement
Make sure to have a clear introduction that outlines your opinion and the points you will discuss.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should discuss one main point.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use simpler sentences and check for spelling errors. This will help make your ideas clearer.
task achievement
You express your opinion clearly about abortion being wrong.
task achievement
You provide a personal example from your experience, which can make your argument more relatable.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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