The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.

The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.
The bar graph illustrates the millions of
Japanese
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visiting international places from 1985 to 1995. The line graph presents the
number
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of Australian tourists contributing to
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Japanese
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tourism.
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, there was a rising trend for
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international visitation with an exemption of a drop in 1991. The same pattern was observed on the line graph with fluctuations in
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1989 and 1994. In detail, an initial value of 5 million
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travelled abroad in 1985 and
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number
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continued to increase and doubled in 1990. A decline in
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number
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by half a million was recorded in 1991. The figure for
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travellers began to increase from 1992 to 1995 when its
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quadrupled from the original value.
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, an upward trend of Australian tourists in Japan was recorded starting from 2%. From there, the value doubled in 1988, the percentage plummeted by 1% in 1989. From there, the figures grew by 2% in four years.
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, in 1994 the Australian's interest in Japan decreased by less than 1%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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