The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Two charts illustrate the information of dance classes attended currently by young people in 1

Australia's

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Australia

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town. The pie

chart

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presents the location, contemporary the bar

chart

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shows the types by age group.

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, it can clearly be seen that the proportion most participants chose was Private studios,

the

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and the

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students under 11 years old had the highest interest in Ballet.

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with the pie

chart

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, the lowest proportion

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choices is College-based studios

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10%. Continually, Community halls and other

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apply

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18%

participants

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of participants

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then

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24%

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apply

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School halls(after-school).

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, the highest percentages are 48% in Private studios, half in popularity compared with 3 places. Regarding the bar

chart

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, the number of students who took part in 3 types of dance classes fluctuated which are Ballet, Tap, and Modern.

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, Ballet has

the

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number of members who are under 11 double the time

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apply

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rather than people in

range

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the range

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11-16.

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, the amount in Morden was approximately 500 in

age

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ages

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11-16,

while

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under

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the under

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11 group was 300.

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, Tap remained around 400 people in both age groups.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "lastly".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

distribution
attendance
community centers
dance schools
private studios
ballet
hip-hop
contemporary
ballroom
analysis
popularity
accessibility
cost
cultural trends
media influences

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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on evironment, eating habit and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the popularity of English growing by the day it is becoming a global language. Many people now neglect their own mother tongue and prefer to learn English. What are the problems that could arise if everyone adopts English as a language? Offer some solutions to this problem.

A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.