Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Mr. Jhony, I hope

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letter finds you well, I am writing

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letter to apologise regarding the noise two days ago and apologise to my family

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about

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issue. Because 2 days ago it was my birthday.

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why, I opened a house for a lot of my friends and invited my family to enjoy my party in my courtyard home.

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, so many young people at my house attend my celebration so I cannot stop them from playing music and bothering your night to take a rest with your small family. Apologise to me and a growing number of my friends and my family with respect to the noise, I hope for the next time I should report to the local council or the societies around me as regards opening the party at my villa.

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, for my birthday next

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, I would like to invite you and your family to join my big family and

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we can enjoy traditional foods and local music. I am highly thankful that you spent time reading my letter, I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Your neighbours, Ajik

Arni Aqlina

Jun 1, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to have clear paragraphs; each one should focus on one main idea.

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Try to use simpler sentences to make your message clear.

coherence and cohesion

Be careful with grammar and sentence structure; some sentences can be confusing.

coherence and cohesion

You have a good greeting and closure, which is important for a letter.

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It is nice that you invited your neighbors to your next birthday party, showing goodwill.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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