The table shows the amount of oil produced everday in Nigeria Chad, Congo and Somalia during a 5- year period from 2000 and 2004

The table shows the amount of oil produced everday in Nigeria Chad, Congo and Somalia during a 5- year period from 2000 and 2004
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the amount of oil produced everday in Nigeria Chad, Congo and Somalia during a 5- year period from 2000 and 2004
The given table illustrates the proportion of
oil
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created day by day in Nigeria
Chad
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,
Congo
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and
Somalia
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over the 5-year period It is clear from the table
Nigeria
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that Nigeria
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and
Congo
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were the countries with the highest number of
oil
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produced
while
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Chad
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and
Somalia
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were less than the four countries. Over the 4-year period from 2000 to 2003, the percentage
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of
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oil
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that
Congo
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created was 275,234,222,215 respectively. Nigeria made less
oil
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than
Congo
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but in 2004 it produced 10000 more
oil
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than
Congo
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On the other hand
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, during the 3 years from 2000 to
2002
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2002,
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Chad
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had no
oil
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production 2003 was the first year that
Chad
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created
oil
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with a quantity of 8000. In 2000 and 2001,
Somalia
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created less than 10000
oil
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. By 2002,
this
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amount increased to17000 and reached 21000 in 2003. In 2004,
Chad
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and
Somalia
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reached50000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, chad, congo, somalia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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