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Band 5

An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your IELTS studies are going. Write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test. In your letter: say what progress you are making explain how you are preparing for the test say which section you are finding the most difficult You should You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Harp, I am writing
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 letter to share my preparation for
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 exam.
To begin
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, my test will held on
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 of June. I am trying my best to get the desired results. I practice each module on
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daily basis. I
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 bought some books to understand vocabulary in a better way and I am improving my speaking skills through an AI application. I
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 subscribed
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 online platform for checking my writing tasks, which helps me a lot to find new ideas for essay writing.
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, I find writing as
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 most difficult module to handle. I get
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 in various parts of
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 of the articles and tenses.
Sometime
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 I write the tasks very confidently but
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 a result I get
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 band scores. I am thinking
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 online classes from an expert so I can master in writing section . You should
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 suggest me to how I can perform better in
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 as
english
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 is your native language. I hope you will suggest
me
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 some ideas out of your expertise. Yours lovingly, Karan

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to proofread your letter for small grammar mistakes, especially articles and tense usage.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use clearer topic sentences when introducing new ideas to help the reader follow your thoughts better.
task achievement
Make sure to add more details in the conclusion or summary to give your letter a strong finish.
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You did a good job of explaining how you are preparing for the test and your progress.
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Your letter has a friendly tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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