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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from one of your teachers. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter: Give details of the job & position you are applying for Explain why the reference is important Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................

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Dear Mrs. Moeyaert, I am Simranpreet Kaur Bhullar,
student
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 of
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the december
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december
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batch, 2023. I hope you remember me. As you know, I have completed my Food Processing degree and currently, I am looking for a
job
 in the same field. Recently, I came to know about a
job
 opening in Maple Leaf company as a Quality Assurance and I would love to apply for
this
 role. Let me explain my situation. You are aware that most food industries ask for
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 before interviewing the candidate in order to get feedback about the behaviour and skills of the person.
Moreover
, I am really interested in getting
this
job
 because
this
 role will work as a stepping stone in my career. Would you kindly provide me
a
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letter of reference which
include
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 details about my academic background and practical skills acquired during
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the college
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college
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 year
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.
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Furthermore
, it would be great to get a reference from you because you taught me the food safety and guidelines program which is completely relevant to the
job
 description provided by the industry. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Simranpreet Kaur Bhullar
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear purpose and focuses on a single idea, which has been implemented well in this letter.
coherence cohesion
Use logical connectors to improve the flow of your paragraphs and ensure that the ideas transition smoothly from one to the next.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task ensuring that you fully cover what is asked in the prompt; the response should be complete and relevant to the question, as you have demonstrated here.
task achievement
Maintain an appropriate tone throughout the letter to match the formality of the situation; keep your language polite and formal, which was done effectively in this letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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