The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram represents how many percentage of men who smoked in seven different countries and all around the world as recorded in 2000 and 2015. A brief overview is that the number of men smoking had the tendency to decrease 15 years later excluding the Egyptian and Lebanese.
Additionally
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, Bangladesh had the most significant change
while
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Cuba showed the opposite.
This
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analysis will begin with the features that had big changes. Regarding Mexico and Amenia, there was a near parity between the two where both figures had a 15% difference, at 67% and 52% for the former and at 20% and 35% for the latter.
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, in 2000, almost
one third
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of Australian males smoked which saw a sharp downfall of 10% from 29%. The same is true for Bangladesh, the 2000 smokers remarkably exceeded the 2015 one by a margin of 24%. Attention will now turn to the one that had small differences over the given period. the figures for Egypt were nearly identical to those for Lebanon, at 35% in 2000 for both and at 49% and 43% in 2015, respectively.
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, with respect to Cuba, the portion of male citizens who smoked saw a marginal decrease. As far as all males around the globe were concerned, 43% of the world's males smoked compared to 33% 15 years later

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart, percentage, adult male smokers
  • world average, increased, decreased
  • tobacco consumption, lung cancer
  • public health, awareness campaigns
  • government policy, smoking bans
  • health risks, nicotine, tobacco industry
  • chart analysis, data comparison
  • statistical trend, significant fluctuation
  • stagnation, steady rise, moderate fall
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