The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005
The given diagram illustrates two maps, providing information
to
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the changes that are likely to take place
at
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the
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Templeton's coastal village from 1990 to 2005.
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, it can be observed that
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town has undergone changes in order to create more commercial, residential and recreational buildings.
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, all public amenities remained in place. Beginning with the north-western half of the village, with respect to the houses and trees around the lake, they were replaced with new apartments.
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, the south-western of the town where
supermarket
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supermarkets
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, apartment buildings and
road
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have been constructed to substitute the rural area. Moving onto the north-eastern of the village where some trees and houses above the school are demolished in order to
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erected.
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, the houses and trees below the school are removed and there are
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amenities
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this
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area.
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, the south-east where the
coutryside
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countryside
is converted into a manufacturing facility. Concurrently, a ferry is built in the
south-east
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southeast
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corner
whereas
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the railway line is extended along the coast.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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