The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

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the changes that are likely to take place

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Templeton's coastal village from 1990 to 2005.

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, it can be observed that

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town has undergone changes in order to create more commercial, residential and recreational buildings.

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, all public amenities remained in place. Beginning with the north-western half of the village, with respect to the houses and trees around the lake, they were replaced with new apartments.

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, the south-western of the town where

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, apartment buildings and

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have been constructed to substitute the rural area. Moving onto the north-eastern of the village where some trees and houses above the school are demolished in order to

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erected.

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, the houses and trees below the school are removed and there are

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amenities

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this

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area.

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, the south-east where the

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is converted into a manufacturing facility. Concurrently, a ferry is built in the

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corner

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the railway line is extended along the coast.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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169 words

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