The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart gives us information about the percentage of passenger
cars
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production
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by continent in 2015.
Overall
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, Greater China, Europe, North
America
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and Japan/Korea are the regions with the biggest percentage of manufacture of
cars
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. South Asia, South
America
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and
Middle
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East/
Africa
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they
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apply
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have the smallest proportion of car
production
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. Greater China and Europe
,
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had the biggest
production
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of
cars
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having half of the proportion between
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then
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them
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with 26% and 25% respectively being these areas the greatest car producers in the world. North
America
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and Japan /Korea are the areas with
bigger
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a bigger
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percentage of car
production
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with 19% and 16%. South Asia
produce
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produces
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8% of the
cars
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used in the world, South
America
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have produced
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produces
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4% of the total of
cars
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and, Middle East/
Africa
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just 2% of the
production
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being
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this
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area the smallest
producers
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producer
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of
cars
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. Europe And China produce 20 times more
cars
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than
Africa
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. Korea/ Japan doubled the
production
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of South
Africa
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, production, america, africa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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