You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: • explain why you chose to study English at the school • describe the problems you had with the lessons • suggest how the classes could be improved

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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dissatisfaction with the teaching quality of your school. I have attended your school for one month to learn the

grammer

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lessons of English. I am

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international student in Canada and English wasn't my first language so I decided to

enchance

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enhance

my grammatical

mistaked

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during

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holidays. I searched on

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and found your school near to my house.

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, decided to take admission.

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doing registration, the ways to deliver the lessons were different when I started attending

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, there

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than 20 students in one class and

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were only for one hour in a day. It was not possible to solve every student's problems. I didn't

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these

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beneficial

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the way of teaching was very unuseful. I hope

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of students will be divided into groups and can attend

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in small numbers

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can help to improve the quality.

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providing more and clear information by tutors to learners can help to understand the concepts of lessons. I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours Sincerely, Saij.

kaursaijbirWed Jun 04 2025

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task achievement

Try to explain your reasons more clearly, especially why you chose the school and how it can be improved.

coherence

Make sure each paragraph has a single main idea and stay focused on it.

cohesion

Use simple linking words like 'first', 'second', 'also', to connect your ideas better.

task achievement

You clearly stated your main concerns about the teaching quality.

suitable writing tone

You used a polite tone throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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