In recent years, there has been an increasing trend of people choosing to live alone more often than in the past.
phenomenon might be explained
the significant changes that we are facing as a modern society. Some factors
as globalization, the rise of more competitive markets, the specialization and creation of new jobs, the entrance of women into the workforce and feminism; an increasing worldwide supply of top talent, and the birth of the internet with its powerful connectivity to mention a few, have had significant impacts on core beliefs, aspirations and the way new
are approaching things. I strongly believe that
social development has implied a variety of benefits in terms of cultural, economic and social aspects,
we can’t deny it
has collateral impacts in the long term.
On one hand, those factors
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led new
to prioritize their careers impacting positively
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the
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of their financials and
, their possibilities.
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positive that nowadays, women have the opportunity to decide if they want to pursue a professional career which has led to their economic independence,
their realization. Another positive factor is that new
are rethinking and, in some cases, delaying the beginning of a family making conscious decisions towards it. Another positive factor is that new
are engaged and investing in gaining valuable experiences out of their communities
as
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around the world, learning new languages, understanding other cultures, and some of them, dedicating time and resources to help environments and communities.
of the day, we have a more prepared and conscious society,
capable and accountable for designing their lives as they want in order to reach their fullest potential. A society
prioritizing its wellness and the pursuit of
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individual definition of success.
, those factors have had
negative consequences. To mention some,
our ability to establish meaningful connections and create memories with our significant ones can be compromised by living alone.
, traditions and culture might suffer an impact when people choose to live alone
of together as we did in the past
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because the best way to transfer and preserve our culture is by living it, and by sharing it on a daily basis with our families. Another aspect to consider
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is that it has been demonstrated that living alone might have an impact on mental health, and in the most extreme cases, lead to depression. Another negative aspect comes when women prioritize their careers leading to a decrease
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the birth rate, which ultimately in the long term, will have an impact on the economy and competitiveness of their countries.
In conclusion, modern societies have been experiencing profound changes impacting their aspirations, approaches and core beliefs, and
, their daily decisions. Living alone
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as an opportunity
aligned with the possibilities that
new world is providing, and we can’t deny it has brought positive development,
negative consequences. I strongly believe that evolution is part of our history, our development and
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. I believe that we will continue focusing our efforts
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sustainable solutions to address the negative side,
we take out the most of its benefits.