Your local council has been doing roadworks to install new internet cables along the road outside your house. This has caused a lot of noise and inconvenience. Write a letter to your local councillor to complain. In your letter: Describe what has happened, say why you are complaining, explain what you would like your councillor to do.

Dear Sir or Madam My name is James Stirling and I have been living in your council's area of responsibility for the
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two years. I am writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with your council's recent construction work. First of all, I would like to explain what happened.
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, we could talk about the possible solutions. Two weeks ago, your council started construction work to lay down new internet cables, which is good.
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, I do not have any complaints about
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.
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,
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roadwork has been continuing right in front of my house. Unfortunately, workers are using extremely loud machines since these are essential for their work.
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, these machines have been disturbing me for the
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2 weeks and now it has become absolutely insufferable.
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, I would politely ask you to speak with the foreman. I would appreciate it if the workers could finish their roadwork as soon as possible. I am looking forward to receiving your prompt response. Yours faithfully, James Stirling

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to clearly state all your points in a structured way. Start with a clear explanation of the problem and then lead into your complaint more directly.
coherence and cohesion
Try to connect the ideas better. Use linking words to show how ideas relate. For example, explain why the noise affects you in more detail.
task achievement
Be more specific about your expectations. Instead of just asking to finish work, suggest specific hours or ways to reduce noise.
coherence and cohesion
You have a clear greeting and closing, which is good for a formal letter.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this kind of complaint.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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