Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take

Dear Verma, I hope you are well. I recently received a letter from you in which you complained about noise.

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, I have two kids who have bad habits. They always fight with each other. If I stop them from fighting,

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they start watching TV at full volume, or they play music and start dancing, which

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troubles everyone around our house with their irresponsible and bad behaviour.

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, I felt ashamed about that, and I can understand what you faced

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my child's actions, so I would like to apologize for

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, to prevent the continuity of

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difficulty, I think some steps should be taken because I do not want anyone to suffer from my babies. First and foremost is to admit them to the playway where they can develop their skills and nurture their talents. It will not only be helpful to teach them some basic manners but

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enhance their knowledge.

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make the house walls soundproof, and

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but not least, spend more time with them, try to indulge them in some activities and games. I hope all these steps will be a solution to your problem. Sorry once again, Warm regards Manpreet Kaur

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on one idea to improve clarity.

task achievement

Add more details explaining how you will help your kids behave in a better way.

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Use a more formal tone in some parts for a better letter format.

task achievement

The apology was sincere and clearly expressed.

coherence and cohesion

The letter had a friendly greeting and closing, which is nice.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincere apologies
inconvenience
disturbance
earnestly
unfortunately
recently
necessary repairs
soundproofing
appropriate hours
notify
regrettable
considerate
peace and quiet
appreciate your understanding
steps to mitigate

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