With computers and internet , people can study and work without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

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without going to school and company continues to divide opinion , as it carries both notable advantages and undeniable disadvantages ,

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its downsides cannot be ignored, I am convinced that its potential drawbacks far surpass the benefits. In

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people

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without going to schools and companies.

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time

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at home,

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, the pupil

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not have chances to interact with

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may cause some mental problems. They

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chances to communicate or chat with

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the kids

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mental issues as they do not interact with

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result student’s mental growth has

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decreased.

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, the pupil did all actions at home and did not interact with

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in person for a

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. They did not get enough socialization with their friend,

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the ability

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with

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, distance working and learning saved much

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accomplished

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more important affairs. Online learning

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need to spend

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to travel

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they can wake up

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.

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the workers have

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at eight o’clock they can wake up at 7:50

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then

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still

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time

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participated

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in

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. The students and workers.

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, working remotely and distance learning

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reduced the

emission

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by

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transportation. The way to preserve our living environment. In conclusion, there were some merits and drawbacks to

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working without leaving

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stayed

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at home can

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the environment and

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accomplished

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more things.

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, the merits

are outweigh

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the disadvantages.