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The table shows information about the numbers of people who took the seven most popular airlines in the US in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows information about the numbers of people who took the seven most popular airlines in the US in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
growth
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 of the number of
the
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passengers in seven
airlines
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 in the US between 1995 and 2005.
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,
it is clear that
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 significant
growth
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 could be observed in all seven airline companies. Among them, JetBlue Airways increased the most noticeably. In 1995, Delta
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 was the most popular, accounting for 500,700 passengers, and it rose to 1,064,000 in 2005 — almost double compared to the original figures.
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, a similar trend could be seen in American, Alaska, and Hawaiian
Airlines
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. They showed 127%, 114%, and 150%
growth
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 respectively. JetBlue Airways experienced a considerable increase throughout the period. In 1995, it was the least common choice, but after the ten-year period, it grew to 300,000. The figure even exceeded those of Alaska and Hawaiian
Airlines
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. Southwest
Airlines
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 and United
Airlines
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 remained relatively stable. The
growth
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 rates were 60% and 33% respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words growth, airlines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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