The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
The maps compared the changes that occurred on the
road
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which led to the
city
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hospital in 2007 and 2010. As you can see from the map, the
city
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underwent major changes over the period.
Moreover
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, the
city
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road
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in
southeast
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the southeast
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remained unchanged . There are new facilities were added.
For example
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,
added
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two
roundabout
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roundabouts
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and reduce the number of bus stops. In general, in 2010, the ring
road
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remained in the south of the
city
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.
In addition
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, the place of municipality hospitals remained in the same position.
Public
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The public
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car park was separated in the southeast of the area. The staff car park remained in the same place along the hospital
road
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. There were two roundabouts. One was in the centre of the map and another one was in the south of the place. The bus stops were removed and replaced by a big bus station on the left of the map.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
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