Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about an interesting website that you have found recently. In your letter, • say how you found it • how it can help • how you use it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………….,

Dear Dhruvi, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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in regard to a helpful

website

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that I have discovered recently which could

also

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benefit you. As you know, I constantly search for ways to enhance my technical knowledge in Mechanical Engineering, and during

that

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that,

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I found a

website

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called http://www.mechanicalenghandbook.com. At

first,

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I thought that

this

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will

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be another basic informative

website

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that only cover basic engineering concepts, but,

fortunetly

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fortunately

, I was wrong, as it has everything from basic concepts to more complex and contemporary foundations.

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, basics of mechanical properties of different materials to

advaced

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advanced

defrential

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differential

deferential

equations and automation in manufacturing.

This

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is a detailed technical resource for us in our

researches

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research

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and at our workplace. I use

this

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website

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when I need in-depth information about material properties,

equations

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and equations

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for different calculations,

as well as

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in my research to optimise workflow at my work. I hope that

this

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website

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will be

also

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usefull

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useful

as it is to me to you. Good luck! Kind regards, Ruchin Patel

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Your letter responds well to the task and covers all the points asked for. Keep it up!

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Try to vary your sentence structure a bit more to make your writing flow better.

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Make sure to proofread for minor spelling errors like 'usefull' which should be 'useful'.

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You provided a clear description of the website and how it can help your friend.

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Your tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

172 words

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