The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901
The table provides key information about the
number
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of males, females and total
employees
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in England and Wales,
as well as
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the
number
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of
factories
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established from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
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, the employee numbers fell continuously over the years,
while
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on the other hand
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, the development of
factories
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showed a consistent upward trend. Over the 50 years, both male and female employment figures decreased significantly, with the sharpest reduction
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in 1871 which
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the workforce size by almost half for both genders.
At the end
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of 1901, the
number
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of male and female
employees
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dropped to 31,000 and 30,000, respectively, from approximately 280,000 and 190,000 people in 1851.
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to
employees
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, the
number
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of
manufactures
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manufacturers
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increased rapidly during the period. Starting with only 225 plants in 1851, and ending with 600 units in 1901, which grew by more than 200%. It was noticeable that the growth trend between
factories
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and
employees
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were contradict
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, as the size of
factories
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raised
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by more than
double
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doubled
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in 1871.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, employees, factories with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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