According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and ’70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happens? How was tourism different in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

Many visitors before used to take

flight

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and went directly to the hotels as believed by the

well known

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magazine.

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is because the fact that they have little knowledge of the local places as well they tend to have no technological systems

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that can help them

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he

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travel.

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,

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people

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are equipped with the internet and it is available to them all the way

whereever

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wherever

they visit. Previously, the invention of portable mobile phones

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not available.

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, it is impossible for them to locate the places.

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factor is that there is

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unavailability

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of pavement, roads, toilet areas and other infrastructure which

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it risky for the tourist to visit and enjoy the local community.

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, many people die during the travel to the

mountaineous

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mountainous

region because of

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road conditions. Travelling is an important aspect of the development just because it helped in the

searching

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of

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for

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new continents, gold and precious resources. As the people are migrating, they used to settle in that place permanently. Many tribes migrated during

the

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that period which is ultimately

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the current generation. In Conclusion, there

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many changes from the past till now in

the

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tourism. The young population now travels far away and

get

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acquaint

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themselves

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from

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the local cultures as compared to the 1960s eras.