Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. - Describe what you bought? - Why you choose that present? - Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present

Dear Neha, I hope

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letter finds you well. Congratulations on the arrival of your little

bundleof

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joy! I was thrilled to hear the news and couldn’t wait to send you something special for the

baby

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. I’ve picked out a

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, soft

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blanket in a lovely pastel blue with adorable little animal prints. It's made from organic cotton, so it’s super gentle on the

baby

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’s skin. I thought

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would be perfect for keeping your

baby

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snug and warm during nap times or outings. I'd love to come over and visit you both soon to give you the present in person. How about we plan for next weekend? Saturday afternoon works well for me. Let me know if that suits you, or if there’s another time that’s better. I can’t wait to meet your little one and catch up with you! Take care and give the

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a cuddle from me. Warm wishes, Aman

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task achievement

You have answered all parts of the question well. You described the gift, explained why you chose it, and suggested a time to visit your friend. Great job!

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to check your sentences for little mistakes. Your writing is clear, but careful checking can help make it even better!

task achievement

Your choice of a present is thoughtful and well-explained. The description of the blanket shows what a lovely gift it is!

coherence and cohesion

Your letter flows well and is easy to follow. The structure is good for a friendly letter!

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

155 words

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