Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community, but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter – Express your feelings about missing the sports event – Tell them about your plans for next year – Explain how this sports event is useful.

Dear Sir, I hope

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email finds you in your best spirits. I'm writing

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letter to express my thoughts on missing the streak of organizing the

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event for the local community

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year. In

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light of the above, I would like to continue sharing my feelings about it. That

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we all wait

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moment.

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, after

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I'm so shattered because I have

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parents

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trip to

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"NewYork" and invited them to be part of

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event. In

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is the only chance we all as a society

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with each other and spread the message of unity.

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, I moved over it and started planning for the next

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theme. I have

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prepared

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list of new sports that we can add like pick a ball.

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, like I already mentioned it is a symbol of unity. Plus it

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allow

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us to unleash the hidden talent from our neighbourhood and assist them or provide a platform to move forward in

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sports

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. Looking forward to

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from you! Yours faithfully Yuvraj

yuvrajrana636

Jun 21, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to organize your ideas more clearly. Each paragraph should stick to one main idea.

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Use simple sentences to express your thoughts better and avoid spelling mistakes.

coherence and cohesion

Try to keep the greeting and closing more formal and friendly. They set the tone of the letter.

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You expressed your feelings well about missing the sports event.

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Your plans for next year show good intentions and enthusiasm.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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Some people think that local authorities should control where building can be constructed. Others thinks that everyone should be free to build where they like without permission. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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