You recently moved to a new city and are looking for a gym to join. Write a letter to the manager of a gym in your neighborhood. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Say why you are interested in the gym. Ask about the facilities available and membership options.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about available services, as the matter requires immediate attention. My name is Adam. I am working in a

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company in New Delhi.

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more screen time and less physical activity, I want to join the gym in the evening.

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I appreciate your casual communication, there should be a lack of clear information regarding booking details. Not only has

this

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caused confusion, but it

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affected our planning. I should have received the brochure.

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, I understand the importance of staying healthy and for

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purpose, I am interested in the gym.

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, I have tried visiting the website, but with no result. Rather than relying on assumptions, I prefer to confirm directly about the facilities and membership options.

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I value your service, I kindly request you to provide the necessary details. Thank you for your attention. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Adam

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Make sure to introduce yourself more clearly at the start of the letter.

coherence

Try to organize your ideas so each paragraph focuses on one main point.

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You showed a good understanding of why you want to join a gym.

coherence

Your conclusion is polite and expresses your desire for a reply.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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