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The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aruzhan

The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aruzhan
The graph illustrates the average Saturday
sales
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 of two bakeries in London, Lovely
Loaves
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 and
Bernie’s
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Buns
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, over the year 2010.
Overall
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, Lovely
Loaves
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 generally had higher
sales
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 than
Bernie’s
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Buns
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 for most of the year,
although
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Bernie’s
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Buns
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 showed strong
sales
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 in a few specific months. Both bakeries experienced noticeable fluctuations throughout the year. In detail, the highest
sales
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 were recorded by Lovely
Loaves
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 in June, with around 140 items sold,
whereas
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Bernie’s
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Buns
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 reached its peak in August at about 130 units. Lovely
Loaves
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also
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 had strong
sales
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 in March and December, maintaining a consistent performance during spring and early winter.
On the other hand
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, the lowest
sales
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 were seen in August for Lovely
Loaves
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, with figures dropping below 40.
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,
Bernie’s
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Buns
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 saw its lowest point in February, selling only around 20 items.
This
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 shows that both bakeries experienced significant ups and downs, possibly
due to
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 seasonal influences or customer preferences.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, loaves, bernie’s, buns with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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