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The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Shyngys

The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Shyngys
The bar chart presents the sales of five different
types
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 of
fiction
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books
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 between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
mystery
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 and
romance
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 was the highest than others and
romance
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 had highest selling throughout the period. In 2006, the
Romance
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 was the biggest between of four different
types
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 of
fiction
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books
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. Second one was "
Mystery
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", and others was similar to each other. In 2007 "
Mystery
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" , "
Romance
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" increase.A "
Mystery
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" increase to level "
Romance
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" in 2006 , the
Romance
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 became bigger. In 2008 They all decrease, they become lesser than 2006 and 2007.
Then
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 the book
types
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 growth step by step.By 2010 they almost were same back in 2006. Looking ahead, all years were growing without 2008 because in
this
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 year all
books
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 fall. The
Romance
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 was the highest in the
this
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 4 of
books
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types
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 of
fiction
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books
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 and by 2007 "
Romance
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" growth about 120,000.00$.Next was "
Mystery
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" competed with "
Romance
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" and it's biggest sales was in 2007 approximately 80,000.00$ .The least popular
fiction
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 genre as of 2010 turned out to be classic literature.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words types, fiction, books, mystery, romance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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