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International travelling is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening doors to increase the number of tourist. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

There is no denying the fact that nowadays, international travelling is becoming cheaper.
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 it is a commonly held belief that many
countries
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 are planning to open doors to raise the
number
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 of
tourists
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. There is
also
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 an argument that opposes it. In
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 essay, I will discuss
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 topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
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 with, there are many advantages for these
countries
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 that decrease the costs of travel.
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, an increasing
number
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 of
tourists
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 will be increased in the economic side of the country they will be visiting.
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, the government will build more and more facilities and services for
tourists
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 and that will provide a lot of benefits for local
people
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.
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, many companies will invest in these
countries
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 to raise their sales.
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, there are many drawbacks to
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 situation.
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,
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 movement may attract many individuals from different layers to visit these
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 and that will affect the security of these
countries
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.
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, an increased
number
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 of
travelers
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 means increased traffic and that will impact the environment and raise from ratio of pollution. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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 kind of question. On balance,
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, I tend to believe that I agree with opening doors for
people
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 from different nations, but must clarify the country's rules for everyone coming from outside.
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, local
people
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 who speak many languages share in translation the rules for
tourists
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 and use several materials
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 social media to raise awareness of a large
number
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 of
people
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.

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