The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The chart compare the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean isoland from 2010 to 2017.
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, The total upward trend, the
visitors
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staying on cruise ships and
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staying on island showing a fluctuating upward trend. From 2010 to 2012, The
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staying on cruise ships curve shows a trend of first rising and
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falling, and
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went up to 2
millions
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of
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between 2012 and 2017. The
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staying on island curve started at 0.75
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of vistors and stayed at the same level from 2010 to 2011, and than increased between 2011 and 2013, stayed constant from 2013 to 2015, arrived at 1.5
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of
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, went down to 1.25
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of
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between 2015 and 2016.
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grew to 1.5 from 2016 to 2017. The total curve start at 1
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of
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then
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arrived at 3.5
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of
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from 2010 to 2017.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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