The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the
number
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of
visitors
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to a Caribbean
island
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over the period from 2010 to 2017, including those staying on the
island
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and those staying on cruise
ships
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.
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, the total
number
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of tourists increased significantly over the period.
While
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both categories showed growth,
visitors
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staying on
cruises
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ships
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experienced the most dramatic rise and eventually became the dominant group. In detail, the
island
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received around 1
million
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tourists in total in 2010. Of those, approximately 0.7
million
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stayed on the
island
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,
whereas
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only about 0.3
million
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stayed on the cruise
ships
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. Over the next few years, the
number
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of
island
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-based
visitors
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rose steadily, reaching just over
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1
million
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by 2012 and remaining stable until 2015.
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, the
number
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of cruise
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ships
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ship
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visitors
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increased gradually at first but
then
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rose sharply after 2012.
This
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figure surpassed 1
million
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round
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2015 and continued to grow rapidly , reaching approximately 2
millions
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million
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by 2017. In total, the
number
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of tourists reached about 3.5
million
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by the end of the period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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