Homeschooling has become very popular in recent years. However most people still believe that attending schools is the best way to obtain formal education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of homeschooling

Undoubtedly,
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home schooling
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homeschooling
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has
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in present times. Many individuals assert that the best way to get
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education is
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schools. The advantages of
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notion and flexibility in
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and availability of comfort zone,
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the drawbacks are lack of social skills
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incompatibility of
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home schoolers
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homeschoolers
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in comparison
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school
going
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children
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. The primary reason why homeschooling is advantageous is that it provides personal
time
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to kids which makes their schedules of doing academic tasks flexible. Following stringent restrictions lessens the interest of
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to do work,
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having flexibility ,
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and maintenance
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of focus is ensured.
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in the comfort space,
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tries
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do numerous new activities without hesitation and can discuss the results
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either with his personal tutor or parents.
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provides him adequate
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to analyse his mistakes and improve his skills. The
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of
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tendency is
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the incapability
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of the student to inculcate social habits like wise leadership, honesty, punctuality, sportsmanship, etc. In him, studying alone at
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does not enable him to encounter
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the qualities required in an individual to stay in the company
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which he lacks in societal qualities.
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,
school going
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children
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or more active and able to cope
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with stress,
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homeschoolers are not as compatible as
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who have joined the school because they
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not undergo numerous circumstances of studying under pressure of
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working in a team and considering opinions of companies and teachers. In conclusion, the major pros of homeschooling are
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the provision
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of flexible
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to mentee and studying in
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space
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one's efficiency,
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its disadvantages are not only lacking
of
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social habits in
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home schoolers
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homeschoolers
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but
also
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they
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are incompatible to tackle several situations as
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to
children
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attending educational institutes.

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