You recently had a holiday in a popular tourist destination. Your friend is going to visit the same destination next month. Write a letter to your friend, offering advice and recommendations for his/her upcoming trip. In the letter describe youe own experince and the highlights of youe holiday provide suggestions on places to visit and local cuisine give advice on accomodation and transport

Dear Jane, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter to you to share my amazing experience of a recent trip to

Goa

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as I know that you are going on a vacation over there as well, next month.

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, I had a lot of fun on a 4-day trip to

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. The highlight of my trip was when I did Scuba Diving. So, it would be great if you would check in for a few adventurous activities as well.

Goa

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is divided into 2 parts- North

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and South

Goa

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. So, I would recommend you to plan your visit for at least a week, so that you will have sufficient time to explore both sides properly. North

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is more of a party hub

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South

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will give you a calm and more relaxing environment and Thalassa Club is great for both parties and food. Most importantly, I would highly suggest you rent a car from the airport as there is no cab facility available in every place. It has been said that there is a taxi mafia available in

Goa

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that charges four times the actual amount.

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, I will say have an amazing time in

Goa

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. Regards Deepti

deeptic258

Jun 28, 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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