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Band 3.5

The Internet is a great source of information and was opening up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on the Internet? What could be done to control information online?

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 has become extremely informative and opens many possibilities to knowledge across the globe.
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,
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 essay will examine whether all data is trustworthy online and the ways to manage them. With the rise of technology, the
Internet
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 is a great source of
information
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 and it is developing rapidly, but many
people
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 question
reliability
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its reliability
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. Can we trust everything we see,
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and everything
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 we discover on the
Internet
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? I believe it has become unsafe where
people
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 can share any
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, whether it is true or not.
People
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 can sell fake
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 by gaslighting individuals into the things that don't work, but to raise their profit.
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, there are many costly educational courses or teachers that guarantee maximum
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 on particular tests.
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,
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 assume that if they attend these sessions, they will confidently pass an exam,
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it
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 is not true. In order to stop unreliable sources of
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, we should raise awareness and set
moderations
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 that will control the
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 significantly, warn the creators and eventually block them. As a public, individuals can post videos informing of
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 false
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 and proposing methods to check the data on credibility.
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, social media platforms should hire managers to control the
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 online and take
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.
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Internet
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 is not safe from disinformation and to solve it, we should
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be aware
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people
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of people
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 and restrict
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individuals from spreading false
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 digital platforms.

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Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction. Use phrases like 'In my opinion' to show your view clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use more linking words to connect your ideas, like 'firstly', 'secondly', or 'for example'. This will help your text flow better.
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Add more specific examples to support your points. This helps the reader understand your ideas more clearly.
coherence and cohesion
You have a good introduction that outlines the main points of your essay.
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You address important issues about the reliability of information online, which shows your understanding of the topic.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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