The diagram below shows the process for producing olive oil. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

The diagram below shows the process for producing olive oil. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for producing olive oil. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
The picture depicts the steps involved in producing
olives
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in industries
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, what stands out from the picture is that there are eight main stages in the diagram, from collecting the
olives
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to delivering them to the store and selling
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them for
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for
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to
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people. In the initial step, on the farm, workers use the rake to collect the
olives
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on the plant, which are stored in the vat for 2 to 3 days.
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,
olives
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are put into a factory to make
oil
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. Once having been washed
by
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with
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cool water,
olives
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are crushed by a three-weight hammer in order to remove olive stones from the container and create
olive
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an olive
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paste for the next step. If you look at the picture, you can see that paste made of
olives
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is brought into a machine that can use
hydraulic
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a hydraulic
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press and filter paste through many layers to make the first
oil
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. After that,
this
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oil
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is transferred to a centrifuge for spinning and separating.
This
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step helps people filter
oil
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and water still in
oil
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.
Next,
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they pack
oil
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into the bottle.
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,
oil
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is transported to the store to serve the needs of consumers.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words olives, oil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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