The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram
illustrate
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illustrates
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the way of recycling bottles made
by
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of
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polymers.
Overall
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, nine stages are included in the waste recycling, starting
form
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throwing the rubbish and ending with
the
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manufacturing the new product.
Firstly
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, the waste is collected and
send
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to
factors
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factories
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where there
is
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are
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worker
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workers
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to diagnose the useful and useless trash. The selected bottles are compressed into blocks
that
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using a compacting machine. These blocks are
then
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broken down into small plastic pieces by a crusher, followed
that
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by
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a washing process
is given
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. In the next
step
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step,
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the clean pieces are
then
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converted into plastic pellets through a melting process.
Later
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the material is dried and
convert
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converted
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into raw materials
in
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for
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making bottles , clothes or pencils. In
this
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way
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way,
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the circle is ended

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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