The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The flow chart illustrates how the
plastic
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bottles
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are recycled in nine steps.
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, there are nine steps for recycling
plastic
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bottles
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,
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and turning the
plastic
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bottles
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into products. It can be separated into two main steps turn to
pellets
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and produce products. Originally, individuals throw the
plastic
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into bins which will be collected by trucks . After that,
plastic
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is transported to a recycling centre. At the
centre
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workers
are sorting
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it to
the
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recycle and
unrecycle
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unrecycled
. Recycling
plastic
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will be compressed into blocks
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so that it can be crushed easily.
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, after washing it will be sent to a machine and producing
plastic
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pellets
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.
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the
pellets
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are collected together and start to heating
pellets
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into raw material. After packing the raw material will be sold out, and go into other factories to produce
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product.
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, raw material is used to produce items
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as
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, clothing, and bags. As time goes the product will be discarded and restarted the cycle

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, pellets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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