The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
This
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processing diagram shows the
recycing
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recycling
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plastic
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of plastic
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bottles
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.
Overall
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, the
recycing
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recycling
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plastic
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of plastic
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bottles
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include
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includes
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9 processes from
people
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when people
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throw the
plastic
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bottles
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to producing end products. The processing
start
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starts
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from
cllecting
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collecting
the
plastic
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bottles
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, people throw the
plastic
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bottles
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in the recycling bin, the recycling car
put
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picks up
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all the
plastic
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bottles
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in the car. The car
transportion
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transports
all the
plastic
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bottles
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in
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to
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the
recysling
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recycling
centre. People in the recycling centre
sorting
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are sorting
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the
plastic
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bottles
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. Compressing the
plastic
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bottles
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into blocks. Use the machine to
crushing
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crush
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the blocks,
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Then
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then
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washing
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wash
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the
piece
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pieces
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of
plastic
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.
put
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Put
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the
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apply
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the clean pieces of
plastic
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into the machine, producing the
plastic
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pellets. Heating pellets to
from
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form
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raw material.Make the
plastic
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to
Verb problem
apply
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block,
then
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use the raw material to
producing
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produce
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end products.
This
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is the
last
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process, and
then
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start from the first process. There are a total of nine steps, forming a cycle that repeats continuously.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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