These days, there is an opinion that
government
should Correct article usage
the government
priorities
health care Replace the word
prioritise
while
some people argue that there are some other sectors where focus should be Linking Words
emphasied
like education. Correct your spelling
emphasised
This
essay will illustrate the merits of both viewpoints.
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To begin
with, medical facilities should be improved with money collected from Linking Words
the
taxes, as Correct article usage
apply
this
is Linking Words
the
basic need for every human being. From newborn Correct article usage
a
baby
to elderly Fix the agreement mistake
babies
person
, everyone will Fix the agreement mistake
people
get
benefit from the enhancement of Verb problem
apply
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the health
health care
sector. Correct your spelling
healthcare
For example
, Linking Words
healthier
the population is Correct article usage
the healthier
less
people will be distracted and more focused on Correct word choice
the more
the
daily goals, which in turn will benefit the Change the word
their
overall
nation. So, putting extra efforts towards Linking Words
the
medical facilities will not help only in the development of individuals, but Correct article usage
apply
also
the whole Linking Words
society
.
Change preposition
of society
Moreover
, if we look at the other side, facilities like educational institutions are very crucial for the growth of Linking Words
upcoming
generation. If our new generation is not well educated Correct article usage
the upcoming
then
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development
of the nation is not possible at all. Add an article
the development
For instance
, if Linking Words
sustainable
amount of funding is not provided towards the research and development Correct article usage
a sustainable
on
new programs, how to keep students interested in learning methods and they will easily lose interest in studiesChange preposition
of
.
To deduce, Change the punctuation
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educations
Replace the word
educational
intitutions
are Correct your spelling
institutions
also
equally important for the growth of our race.
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To conclude
, different age groups will benefit Linking Words
with
the Change preposition
from
developement
in different sectors. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
development
focus
of government should be priorities Add an article
the focus
according to
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need
of time and demographics.Fix the agreement mistake
needs