Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe they should only be allowed to study subject which are useful in future like science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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others believe that
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university
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market. 
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following
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discussion
will explore the
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opposing
views surrounding the issue and provide a reasoned personal opinion.
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the one hand,
student
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should join whatever they like and should follow their
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advantage
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somthing
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universty
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university
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life
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on what they
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in university.
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addition, we should empower the students to follow
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choose
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the other hand,
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individuals
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like to force the students to
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have
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in their community if they
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something
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feel depressed
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it
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, if you force
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an Engineer
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will have a weak doctor
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instead
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summary
, after discussing both sides of the view.  We should assist and
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allow
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student
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beeing
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be
supported and empowered to achieve their goals,
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dreams
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and
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passions
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task achievement
Improve your introduction to clearly state both views and your opinion more clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphs for each point you want to make. This helps the reader follow your ideas better.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple sentences and correct spelling to avoid confusion. This helps readers understand your points.
task achievement
You clearly show that you understand the topic and discuss both views.
task achievement
You make a good argument for letting students follow their interests.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university
  • students
  • study
  • subjects
  • freedom
  • passion
  • creativity
  • skills
  • interests
  • society
  • unexpected
  • believe
  • focusing
  • useful
  • good
  • jobs
  • future
  • practical
  • needs
  • opportunities
  • fields
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