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The table provides data on the year of opening, route length, and annual passenger numbers (in millions) for underground railway systems in six major cities.

The table provides data on the year of opening, route length, and annual passenger numbers (in millions) for underground railway systems in six major cities.
The table provides data on the
year
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 of opening, route length, and annual passenger numbers (in millions) for underground railway systems in six major
cities
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.
Overall
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,
London
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 has the longest railway system,
while
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Tokyo
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 carries the most
passengers
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 per
year
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. The oldest systems are in
London
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 and
Paris
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,
whereas
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 Los Angeles has the newest.
London
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’s underground system opened in 1863 and covers 394
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kilometers
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, the longest among
the
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cities
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.
Paris
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 and
Tokyo
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 have slightly shorter networks, with 199 and 155
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kilometers
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 respectively.
In contrast
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, Kyoto has the shortest route at only 11
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kilometers
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. In terms of
passengers
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,
Tokyo
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 serves 1,928
million
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 people per
year
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, followed by
Paris
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 (1,191
million
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) and
London
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 (775
million
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). The other
cities
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 – Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles – each serve fewer than 150
million
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 annually.
Furthermore
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,
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 Angeles
close
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is close
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 to 28
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kilometers
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kilometres
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.
Tokyo
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 recorded a significant number of
passengers
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 per
year
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around
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, around
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 1928
million
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While
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Paris
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 recorded 1191
million
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passengers
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.
Then
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,
London
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 had 775
million
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. The rest of the
cities
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 recorded lower than 50-150
passengers
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, cities, london, tokyo, passengers, paris, kilometers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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