The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
The
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graph shows the proportion of users of social media by
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in Jamestown in 2018.
Overall
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, the information about the rate of social media users by
age
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in Jamestown in 2018. And it had 2 cases, the first was over 30
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per cent
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and
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the other was under 20%. The two
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groups with the highest percentages in the
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chart were 26-35 and 13-25 years old. In the period 13-25 years old used almost half of the
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chart at 40%.
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26-45 years old used about 5% less
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35% of the
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chart.
On the other hand
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, there were three
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groups that were smaller than the percentage
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20%. The highest one in all three was 15% with 36-45
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on the
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.
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one
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2 groups
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were lower than 10%, one after another was 2% and 8% with all ages from 46-55 and over 55.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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