The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in their year 1 assessments in 2008 and 2012

The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in their year 1 assessments in 2008 and 2012
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in their year 1 assessments in 2008 and 2012
The chart illustrates in the year 2012, the comparison of students that how good they perform in their tasks in the various disciplines.
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, it can be seen that the
boys
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played more in almost every activity in comparison to the
girls
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. Only a couple of games
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are dominated by
girls
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. Hockey was a sport where both
girls
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and
boys
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did not play much. In 2012, tennis was played by 50
boys
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and around 36
girls
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.
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, badminton was dominated by 40
girls
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rather than 30
boys
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and a similar record was seen in swimming, with 50
girls
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and
boys
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around 41
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boys.
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The cycling had many differences between
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and
girls
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, with 36
boys
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and 20
girls
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, but in football, there was a huge difference
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39
boys
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. There were 60
boys
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and 21
girls
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in the football
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team.
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There was almost a constant ratio of
boys
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and
girls
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9 and 13, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • assessments
  • performance
  • disciplines
  • students
  • compare
  • differences
  • top-performing
  • lowest-performing
  • average scores
  • trends
  • factors
  • subject
  • interest
  • external factors
  • patterns
  • gaps
  • practical
  • theoretical
  • success
  • content
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