Some people claim that it is acceptance to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that using
animals
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for research in the healthcare industry for human profit is acceptable,
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there are others who believe that it is cruel with respect to them.
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essay will discuss both points of view and argue in favour of the former. On the one hand, testing products is a crucial part before it will appear on the shelves in the shops. And
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conducting research on
people
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is prohibited, there is no law that forbids doing them on other creatures.
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, in some
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aspects,
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humans and
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have health similarities,
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, mice's skin is as sensitive as humans'.
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, if there is a need to make a test on cosmetics, mice may help to avoid the participation of
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, which may lead to a reduction of health risks that could arise.
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, using
animals
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for
people
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's benefit is violent and selfish because usually they are specially bred only for these tasks, and as long as these creatures live so much they suffer. Namely, testing on their skin, eyes, ears, and even their inner body.
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, if it is not tested on
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,
people
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may experience various diseases, ranging from inflammation and finishing cancer, and other serious issues.
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,
while
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some
people
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believe that using
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for testing and
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getting benefit
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from
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is cruel and selfish, I strongly believe that it is inevitable to stop
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practice because it helps to avoid health problems which may affect humanity.

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Make sure your introduction clearly states the topic and your opinion. Use a clear thesis statement.
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Make your paragraphs easier to follow by using linking words and phrases. This will help connect your ideas better.
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Provide more specific examples to support your points, especially about the medical benefits of using animals.
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The essay presents both sides of the argument well, which shows good understanding of the topic.
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You have attempted to highlight the ethical concerns and benefits, which reflects a balanced view.

Your opinion

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomedical research
  • ethical dilemma
  • inhumane treatment
  • alternative methodologies
  • animal welfare
  • regulatory standards
  • clinical trials
  • synthetic models
  • genetic engineering
  • bioethics
  • sentience
  • pharmacological safety
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