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The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the type of
jam
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 and
their
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its
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 consumption within the Asian continent from 1991 to 2014.
Overall
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, the
use
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 of
strwberry
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strawberry
jam
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was
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apply
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decreased suddenly after the year 1996,
while
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 the
usage
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 of
lemon
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jam
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 was relatively constant and fell in
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last
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the last
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 five years. The cherry
jam
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was
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apply
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came
in
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to
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market
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the market
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from
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in
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 2006 and consumption
was
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rose for the same period.
Firstly
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, the strawberry
jam
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was
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dominated the market since 2001 with the
use
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 of nearly 140
tons
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 in 1991, and it
is
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rose to 160
tons
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 in 1996. After that
period
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period,
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 the
use
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were
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decline
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declined
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 constantly and finished with just above 40
tons
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 in 2014,
while
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 the
use
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 of
lemon
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jam
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was climbed
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increased
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 and
surpass
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surpassed
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 the
strwberry
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strawberry
jam
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usage
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 in 2001.
Lastly
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, the
lemon
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jam
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were
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was
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 not
much
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very
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 popular in 1991 with just nearly 80
tons
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usage
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,
then
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 the
lemon
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jam
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usage
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were
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apply
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incraesed
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increased
 with 100
tons
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approximate
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apply
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in 2001 and stayed constant within
next
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the next
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 five years,
than
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then
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fall
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fell
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 again and completed with just 40
tons
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 in 2014. The cherry
jam
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 came
in
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to
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 market
from
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in
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 2006 and
become
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became
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 famous and rose
dramaticaly
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dramatically
 with above 80
tons
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 in
next
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the next
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 five years, after that
fall
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fell
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 and finished with
highest
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the highest
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cosumption
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consumption
 in 2014 with just below 80
tons
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jam, use, usage, lemon, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • upward trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • popular
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