The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
The given diagrams outline the proportion of publications read by
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and young
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each
week
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at Australian
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, and it is
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categorised
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into three groups, containing 1 to 5, 6 to 11, and 12+ read articles each
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. In general, publications have
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been read
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by the PhD
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candidates and professor
students, making it
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the highest
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percentage among the others.
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,
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barely read articles per
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, and it is
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shown
by the data. PhD
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showed a
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high
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of
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readreading
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, because more than
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(80%) of the
pupils
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read 12 (or more) articles per
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.
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, young
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teachers
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showed a moderate interest, accounting for 24%,
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in reading
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publications, but not as high as professor
pupils
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.
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who
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read more than 12
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week
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almost a quarter compared to the PhD
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candidates and professors
. By the given data, it
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showed
that 24% of the academician read
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, and the other type of learnerother type of learners showed lower interest
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in reading
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more than 12 books, m. Making it
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as the lowest percentage
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of reader
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reader
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readers
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in category 12 or more.
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, the number of students reading less than 5 papers showed a significantly
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trend to the highest segment of reading
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, which is a little over 5 times (60%+) of the maximum group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pupils, week, journals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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